I'm playing with several Title ideas, 'Requiem for a Hen'; 'The Executioner: Out for Lunch'; 'The Eggsecutioner, The yolks on you'.
They're a little trite, but I'm trying to give the short an element of nostalgia, thinking in terms of Tom & Jerry, back in the Fred Quimby days. Anyhow, let me know what you, all comments welcome.
I want the final image to be bigger, so the audience can see the axe head, I may also reduce the amount of the egg that can be seen so as to give the impression of some uppermost scalp. I also think the image would be quite successful in silhouette. I shall post more when I have it.
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