I am a first year CG Arts and Animation student and this is where my work lives. I hope you enjoy what you see, feel free to comment on anything.
Welcome!
good - more creative traffic, and I like the spiky-headed study - has a nice b-movie feel somehow. But, I do have some style points that I hope you'll take constructively: it's great that you're reflecting on your work, but maybe a touch more professionalism in terms of tone? There's a certain larkiness could irritate someone looking to take you more seriously, so all I'm suggesting is that you develop a persona for presenting your work that keeps things friendly, but a bit more formal. Also, while it's great you're getting into this updating habit, I suggest you try and update 'little and often' and maybe refrain from referring to your work as 'blog-dump', as the associations are not good! :)
Hello Simon! I agree with Phil, take more enjoyment in your work progression because the ideas you're producing are good! But the way, just as a reminder of the idea I gave you about the possible cyclops idea? Might be interesting to take the Chameleon 360 degree vision into an actually visual level? Like a bulbous bar of optics, stretching across your face :3 If you'd like a drawn example of this idea made I'll be more then happy to accommodate ^ ^
Hey Simon,
ReplyDeletegood - more creative traffic, and I like the spiky-headed study - has a nice b-movie feel somehow. But, I do have some style points that I hope you'll take constructively: it's great that you're reflecting on your work, but maybe a touch more professionalism in terms of tone? There's a certain larkiness could irritate someone looking to take you more seriously, so all I'm suggesting is that you develop a persona for presenting your work that keeps things friendly, but a bit more formal. Also, while it's great you're getting into this updating habit, I suggest you try and update 'little and often' and maybe refrain from referring to your work as 'blog-dump', as the associations are not good! :)
sorry - *that could irritate*
ReplyDeleteHello Simon! I agree with Phil, take more enjoyment in your work progression because the ideas you're producing are good! But the way, just as a reminder of the idea I gave you about the possible cyclops idea? Might be interesting to take the Chameleon 360 degree vision into an actually visual level? Like a bulbous bar of optics, stretching across your face :3 If you'd like a drawn example of this idea made I'll be more then happy to accommodate ^ ^
ReplyDeleteby the way* Sorry :S
ReplyDeleteLove the skeleton study on the last page, great to see!
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