Tuesday, 25 October 2011

Unit 2 / Space / Film Review 1 / The Cabinet of Dr. Caligari 1920

Year1 Unit2 FRCagilari FFinal

1 comment:

  1. Hey Simon,

    Very encouraging to see you keeping on top of your reviews. That said, they're a little 'content-lite' and instead of marooning your three quotes at the end of your reviews like islands, you need to integrate quotes into your argument - use them proactively to enhance and scaffold the points you're trying to make. Your reviews give the impression of being written without much wider reading or preparation. I want you to take a look at Chrissie or Emma or Meg's film reviews, because they're very satisfying in terms of content, academic 'voice' and structure.